Wednesday, January 15, 2014

Winter Eyes and Dogku, Spark Writing Ideas!

 

As we returned from winter break, the frigid weather seemed to be the conversation among everyone.  The girls listened enthusiastically to each other's wintertime stories.  Poems from the book, Winter Eyes, also inspired them to reflect upon their feelings about winter.




Next, the girls modeled the haiku writing of one of their favorite authors, Andrew Clements.  His popular book, Frindle, is currently our read aloud. 

In his book, Dogku, he writes:
An idea knocks:
I open, think, write, and smile.
And then it's your turn.


Now, let us share our traditional Japanese haiku writings.  Each poem has 17 syllables, written in a 5/7/5 syllable count.  


White snow on the ground,              Abby
Sledding children all around.
Winter here at last.

Chicken noodle soup                        Ashy
Snuggling up with family
Watching good movies

Warm, fuzzy blankets                       Maddy
Make a hot drink when it's cold
Have a snowball fight

I sat at the fire                                   Meley
as I sipped hot chocolate.
I saw a snowman.

Ice skates, figure eights                    Lexie
Hot chocolate, stemming hot
Fire wood burning, crack!


Icicles hanging                                    Lydia
Opening presents are fun
Winter break, no school!

Sitting by the fire                                Lucia
Christmas, friends, presents, carols
Warm sweaters, warm hugs

Christmas lights, warm fires              Grace
Wearing gloves, warm pajamas
Making a snowman

Sledding is so fun                               Mia H.
My dog Panda loves the snow
Snow ball fights are great

No school, ice skating                         Ingrid
Hot chocolate, cookies
Snow covered trees, warm fires

Ice skating is fun!                                Meredith
I like having snowball fights.
Hot chocolate, Yum!

Hot coco, skiing                                   Lizzie
Icicles hanging on trees
Eating snow outside

Snowball fights outside                      Merriwether
Hot chocolate with fluffy
marshmallows after.

Wake up look, the snow                      Sadie
It's glistening, like the ice
Seriously look!